This is my first poem:
Splendor
The dulled red of the smoke stack,
contrasting the glimmering mass of the ocean.
High and low,
nothing is quite even.
Black tiled floors are a sparkling gateway to bliss.
The wonder of the details surpasses the
whole.
The long hallways extend forever,
voyeurism never ends.
Animated posters depict unlikely scenarios.
Repetition, repetition
The renters age is apparent:
lipsticked mirrors, American flag bandana.
Little speakers protrude, provoking sounds,
cushioned by luxurious pillows.
Scattered personalities fill the room.
Each person is their own decoration,
opinions expire, chatter clangs.
He sits quietly in red and black:
special shoes.
The hat is missing, no representation of home.
Expression is intrigued by a familiar position.
A release of comfort flows from his teeth.
Wink.
Air shifts, intimacy is inhaled through the door and into his nose.
Glare, then slowly makes his
exit.
Southern Distress
It was worse back then:
stolen kittens and freshly killed meat.
She raises a finger,
There, that's where he hung the drunk man by his feet, with the dirty rope.
And the smell of okra and intolerance rose from the ground.
Which reminds me of that black, mid-night snake I found in the barn.
It crawled, with hands, into my dream.
He came to my window last night and he's all there was.
Cold and white, the moon leaked a fresh stream of air.
With the things i can not have you force -
a cut,
beneath my skin.
And i'll see you and me in the distance.
Daydream
Bronze statues and grey horizons,
weeping cities of no existence.
Yellowed pages bound in leather lay on antique rugs.
The tree will catch your dreams.
Stars in the night sky are over filled, magic
bubbles.
The spider's web is shattered:
a broken hand mirror reflecting rainbow light.
The moon follows the tide,
plumet.
Darkness is void of your of mistake.
Remember, blood stains.
And they'd never guess I'm talking about you.


It looks like I have found the editor of our school literary magazine. What do you think?
ReplyDeleteThese poems are hard to understand but I think I got most of it. Your really good and I love your use of words. I can see that you really like poetry. Good job!
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